Friday, October 24, 2025

Two, 2, More Minutes More with You!



Two, 2, Minutes More with You

We are early for school drop off 

Twelve years has past

Like yesterday we walked together holding hands, jumping in puddles

Now, well on his way in all different great directions in life

Oh, I don’t mind waiting with you

Two, 2, minutes more with you 


Thoughts of our early lives together 

Our children from birth to now

Seeing you now with your own family,

careers, homes and kids young to pre-teen, and teens 

Oh how we long, yearn for, desire 

Two, 2, minutes more with you 


Thoughts of those we love and loved and now gone before us

The example, drive, hopefulness, sparkle in the eye of joy 

What we feared was gone with their brief life, even 100 years is a brief life, 

Lives on in those we see before us this day and every day we have on earth

Yet it gets me thinking deeply- how I pine for, cry out for, and dream of

Two, 2, minutes more with you 


I write this down

for the next generation to [pause]

To lift up one another as we wait- for the dream, for the job, for the dx, for the answers, the clarity

So as we see the plan unfold, more beautifully than we could’ve created ourselves, 

We will praise the Eternal, 

and the next, and the next generation will see the value, 

and what ancestors held to heart 

The most important thing in this brief, fleeting  life is always and forever and  shall be

Two, 2, More Minutes More with You!


About this poem: Two, 2, More Minutes More with You is a poem about this brief, fleeting life and how we would give anything to spend more time together even two minutes waiting for a drop off at school.

[We get to hear your voice. We get to see the sparkle in your eye, and hope in your actions to a better future together!] 

Long after you and I are gone, those to come after us will remember and follow hard after God, family, and getting all out of life possible for their good and the good of others!

- Joe  and Jayne Holuta



“Write this down for the next generation

so people not yet born will praise God:” 

Psalm 102:18 (message)


“It you have a friend who is struggling, come close and enter the messiness of their pain.”- Vaneetha Risner









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Two, 2, More Minutes More with You!

Two, 2, Minutes More with You We are early for school drop off  Twelve years has past Like yesterday we walked together holding hands, jumpi...